Group pitch

It was said in our audience feedback that we need to think more about our characters journeys which we knew and took into account and since then have come up with the ways in which the characters will cross paths. In their morning daily routine they all pass the same bench which is where they will be seeing each other and making judgements on each other. Another suggestion we got is for our characters to come together based on their differences and form a friendship which is an idea we had thought about right at the beginning but we decided on a different ending. It was only said that we will touch upon ethical issues with our Joseph character, however we get around that with our moral which is not to judge a book by it's cover because joseph ends up being a CEO of a charity.